Carlos blog3 comment.

The thesis is almost correct to me. The concept of the story is accurate. You used your own words, but it should have been A little longer.There are A few grammatical eras. capitalization, and placement of periods and commas.It was well written besides that. there where no spelling errors and A good choice of words. You didn't state the facts of the passage in order. You added your opinion and own examples.I agree with them, but it wasn't supposed to be in the summary. Your summary should have been a little longer and  detailed. . A sufficent summary is more discriptive of the events that took place.You have the capability to execute A good summary, but you need to to follow instructions.